Add to Wishlist. USD 0. Sign in to Purchase Instantly. Explore Now. Overview If the King is fated to love thirteen women before he turns fifty, is he still husband material? This word short story is a stand-alone prequel to A Spell for Susannah. Product Details About the Author. About the Author Jody Wallace grew up in the South in a very rural area. Average Review.
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Write a Review. Related Searches. As a crusader His love life, however, is a bust. His foreseen bondmate is Anisette View Product. A Pixie's Tale. The problem? It's a taste of her delicious blood, blood that may give I did worry about this, and decided that the key to the balance of this item was that it was fairly easy to counter.
I couldn't figure out a way to specifically call out the countermeasures I imagined in the text, however. You could heal someone inside just fine if you did it from the outside. The radius was set to equal that of a channel so that unaffected channels could not reach the candle itself. The second countermeasure I imagined was sundering the candle.
It's not too hard to break an icicle! Were those enough to make this a balanced item? I admit I probably would have to think long and hard before publishing this in a book as is. I think it would have to be tweaked a little more to become balanced.
But I also don't think it's nearly as bad as some of the commenters make it sound in their posts. I realize I haven't addressed all of the concerns here directly. Some of them I'll probably be thinking about for a while. The first draft of this item that had all of the powers was priced at 4, gp based on my analysis of how powerful I thought my item was. The reason I lowered it so much before submission is that players tend to be very reluctant to buy expensive consumables, especially if their usage is rather niche.
The name was the last thing I came up with and it was difficult for me, but when I discovered the word "wintertide" during a thesaurus search I knew I had what I was looking for.
Thanks for the insight on your thought process during design, I stand by my critique but that was meant in the spirit of constructive if viewed otherwise please accept my apologies. No matter what any commentators say you won the public over enough to make top 89 and the judges over enough to make the top 32 which is no mean feat. Congrats again. Honestly I could see using your item with a clarification on allied mechanics bearer's choice and a slight uptick on price 2,, and I'd throw these in my game in a heartbeat.
So gp for 25 dmg. It's not something most players would waste money on. Template Fu Jan 27, , am As prior entries will tell you, Template Fu is one mean point eating machine, but will also praise where praise is due. I will get there in the end. Review Caveat: I try to keep things totally dispassionate and all comments herein are my own. Having not made the illustrious levels that you have achieved this year, I can only caveat that anything I propose in feedback may not be totally in line with what Paizo thinks or needs of its freelance game designers, so do consider carefully any and all feedback I make under this light.
I actually like it that way, it feels cleaner and more easier to read and scan even though it probably makes nada difference. The sound of full belly contented dragon-kin rumbles are coming from his nest, sssh, quietly tip toe on please.
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Flesch Reading Ease Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level So looking at your first line, is it possibly to remove that word? Your item falls into this trap — it is especially bad between sessions if they are weekly or less frequent and you have to stop right in the middle of something in game. GM and player will have to track the current available duration remaining for the day — always try to design to keep the game flowing and the book-keeping as low as possible. With how it is currently, there is the possibility that some portion of mundane candle remains — and players will ask if there is that chance.
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It saves a few more precious words for you to use elsewhere if you need them. It would increases the max duration to 12 because it is a foot long :p. Getting to the last paragraph, we have a grenade like effect. I immediately wondered about splash damage you stand next to the student being water bombed at rag week, you will get some of it too. This is something that could have rounded this last action out using words saved earlier ;.
Generally, I think you covered the bases pretty well, the rules are tight and innovative. I think the powers are all equally cool and flow in the natural order that they should. But I do feel guilty for taking that point.
With the rules fu evident here, I certainly look forward to your archetype with great expectation! Thanks for the very nice template fu review. I'm thrilled to receive a decent score. I loved the theme of this item, especially as when I read it, it was snowing. As soon as I read it, I could imagine using it, and that bought me right away. The writing is very good, and the first paragraph describes the candle and effects beautifully.
The mechanics look really good, and I have no objections on that part. The idea itself is very novel, at least for me.
I really like the way you've played with channel energy, especially the potential for sabotaging one's opponents channels. That is a very unusual mechanic and an effective one. Search this Thread:. Description This translucent white candle is one foot long and resembles an icicle.
Yeah, this one oozes atmosphere and play possibilities, for both heroes and villains. As a balance issue, though, 10d4 damage against undead for gp? Seems a little too good. I like it, it's weird. Welcome to the Top 32, Morphemic! I wish you the best of luck in future rounds! Glad to see this made it, probably in my top five of items I saw that I enjoyed.
Well done, sir! This was a near keep for me, I liked the atmosphere of it a great deal. This item is creepy and cool pun only sort of intended. Congratulations on making it to the top I'll see you in the archetype round! I think I only saw this once or twice, but I know I voted for it. Mark, congratulations on being top 32! Food for thought.